You Can't Take It Back

[suzanami]

Heyho~~
My crackfic, You Can't Take It Back, has been coming along relatively nicely considering I haven't written a multi-chaptered fic since, like, 2002. I have four chapters written, though they do need more editing. Some more than others. Oy.

They're on my fanfic LJ, ~getlosthood. The tag for all entries concerning the story is:
http://community.livejournal.com/getlosthood/tag/chaptered+-+you+can%27t+take+it+back
The newest chapter is at the top, so you'll have to scroll down for earlier ones. ^^;


There's four chapters up right now. Thoughts would be really helpful. D:

It's Fuu/Ferio-centric (predictable, I know), but also has a side of Umi/Ascot, though it's kinda ambiguous~ nothing heavy. I promise there's more to the plot than just the soap opera, too. ^^; I'm getting to it. This has been bouncing around in my little head for way too long. I'm just glad to get it out. I'm realy self-conscious about it, so don't judge me. XDD

Thanks in advance for reading. :3

[Madoushi_Clef]

Only for you or Ai-chan will I read an Asmi fic. *grins sheepishly and clicks link*

[suzanami]

Only for you or Ai-chan will I read an Asmi fic. *grins sheepishly and clicks link*

Awww. *blush* <3

[Madoushi_Clef]

Only for you or Ai-chan will I read an Asmi fic. *grins sheepishly and clicks link*

Awww. *blush* <3

<3 back. I found myself scrolling down through all your fanfics, and I left a couple comments!

[suzanami]

I got them. <3<3<3
Thanks so much. *comment whore*

[Ai]

Only for you or Ai-chan will I read an Asmi fic. *grins sheepishly and clicks link*

Awwww ... ^^- Thank you!


Suzanami, this work is BRILLIANT! =D I didn't leave any comments on the chapters, because I just too lazy to sign into Livejournal and do that .. but I'm thinking now maybe I should. ^^ The writing is wonderful, as usual, and the entire idea of something such as Umi and Ferio, getting drunk and accidentally doing the naughty is just so original and .. Wow. *_* I don't think many people can think of creating a fanfiction with those ideals, so I really give you a bunch of cookies for originality. =D

I can't really say anything constructive, because I can't find anything to correct. XD Rae-chan brought up a good point when I was talking to her just a few moments ago, and I have to agree. We both think it's wonderful that you wrote Clef into one of your stories, nonetheless that you wrote him extremely in-character! More cookies! =D!

... Okay, I think I'm done here. =D But I shall continue reading for as long as this work of art continues! >D Buwahahahaaa~!

[Madoushi_Clef]

I don't think many people can think of creating a fanfiction with those ideals, so I really give you a bunch of cookies for originality. =D

She probably has a HUGE pile of cookies now... I've given her, like, mounds of e-cookies in the last couple days... Yah full yet, suzanami?! XDD

Rae-chan brought up a good point when I was talking to her just a few moments ago, and I have to agree. We both think it's wonderful that you wrote Clef into one of your stories, nonetheless that you wrote him extremely in-character! More cookies! =D!

Yeah, does it make you feel special that we were having a long CONVERSATION about your fic? *pets* And yes, you wrote him very in-character. I still can't write him even remotely IC... *headdesk* And look! *point* You just got MORE cookies!

[suzanami]

Actually, I'm totally flattered you were having a convo about my fic. *3* It's been... over three years since I put out a chaptered fic, and I forgot how fun it was to dangle the fic in front of those waiting for the next installment. XD *sadistic* I'm so glad you guys like it. I can never get enough cybercookies. Trust me. :0

I have trouble grasping Clef very deeply, so I'm nervous about writing him. :x I'm working in more characters (though some are just mentioned, I wanna have as many in as is natural) as it goes on. Caldina giving Ferio advice. Just the thought is gold. X3;


*munches cookies*

[Milieva]

>.<  Suzu,  Why have you done this to me?  Why!  I started reading the damned thing.  You completely screwed over all of my comfort pairings.  And now...  Now!!  I have to finish reading. (whether I want to or not.)

Why, must you do this to me? I gave you an archive...   An archive you can edit your own fics on.   

*cries as she opens LJ to read the next chapter before work*

[suzanami]

Hmmm, why yes. I am evil. I crush your hopes and dreams. I live to violently shove you out of your comfort zone.
Actually, I just apparently get off by doing terrible things to characters I love. I apparently am an evil puppet master.

Don't blame me! *points at Umi and Ferio* They did it, not me! D:

Also, don't worry too very much about the Asmi~ it's pretty light. Lighter than I had intended it, even. Like I mentioned over in Pairings, it's only Asmi because I don't like Clemi... and I like Clef better on the sidelines in this fic, personally. So he can yell at everyone for being stupid teenagers. X3;

[Madoushi_Clef]

So he can yell at everyone for being stupid teenagers. X3;

*again I giggle* I still love the steam coming out of his ears. 'tis quite amusing.

and I like Clef better on the sidelines in this fic, personally.

*this* fic, eh? *ponders on what she can bribe suzanami with*

*putters off to work on her FuuFerio fic*

[suzanami]

*this* fic, eh? *ponders on what she can bribe suzanami with*

*putters off to work on her FuuFerio fic*

I can be bribed with Hououji Fuu-related things, Ferio-related things, Fuu/Ferio-related things, shiny things and kittens. And sometimes Autozamy goodness. BOYS' NIGHT OUT, BABY.

[Ai]

You know what would be funny .. And I apologize in advance for being incredibly off-topic on this one, but it has to be said.

I think it would be funny to write a Ferio/Fuu fic in which the two are engaged, and the guys try to take Ferio out for a Bachelor Party, while the girls try to force Fuu into a Bachelorette Party. XD We all know Fuu would completely reject .. and Ferio would probably try to resist the -cough- guests.

SUZA, TRY NOT TO LET RAE-CHAN BRIBE YOU! She took advantage of my request form .. -pouts-

[Madoushi_Clef]

SUZA, TRY NOT TO LET RAE-CHAN BRIBE YOU! She took advantage of my request form .. -pouts-

HEY NOW. At least I'm not trying to make her write CLEMI. I already know her too well for that. That comes later. I'm only bribing her to write Clef. I <3 her writing.

*coughs* And, so, how is that Clemi you owe me coming along, Ai-chan?

[suzanami]

I think it would be funny to write a Ferio/Fuu fic in which the two are engaged, and the guys try to take Ferio out for a Bachelor Party, while the girls try to force Fuu into a Bachelorette Party. XD We all know Fuu would completely reject .. and Ferio would probably try to resist the -cough- guests.

I am so off to make a plot bunny thread.